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Task 1 图表描述 + Task 2 议论文 | 适用:贺弋芷 | 框架先行,词汇填空
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小作文总论:客观描述,四段骨架
总原则
  • 客观描述图上信息,不写观点、不分析原因
  • 字数 ≥ 150 词,建议 20 分钟收手(大作文占 2/3,大头留给它)。
四段骨架
① Introduction 改写题目(别抄原句) ② Overview 总体概述(2–3 句写整体大趋势/最高最低,不写具体数字③ Body 1 细节分组描述 ④ Body 2 另一组细节 + 对比
四类图先想哪三问
  • 线 / 柱:整体升还是降?谁最高/最低?有没有反超(交叉)?
  • 饼 / 表:哪项最大、哪项最小?能不能归并成几类?
  • 流程 / 地图:分几步 / 现状有什么、规划改了什么?用被动还是方位?
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线图 Line Graph —— 趋势描述
趋势动词(上升:由缓到猛)
强度动词例句
一般rise / increase / grow / go up / climbThe figure rose steadily over the period.
较强surge / jump / leap / escalateSales surged after 2010.
猛烈soar / rocket / skyrocketThe number soared to a peak in 2020.

📌 climb / soar / rocket 自带"力度",后面常不再加 sharply;rise / increase 要靠副词表力度。

趋势动词(下降:由缓到猛)
强度动词例句
一般fall / decrease / decline / drop / go down / dipThe percentage fell gradually.
较强slump / sink / tumbleProfits slumped in 2015.
猛烈plummet / plunge / collapse / crashThe figure plummeted to its lowest point.

📌 dip = 小幅短暂下降又回升;plummet / plunge = 断崖式暴跌,自带"猛"。

平稳 / 波动 / 极值
类型表达例句
平稳remain stable / steady / constant;level off;plateau;stabiliseThe figure remained stable at around 50%.
波动fluctuate;vary;rise and fall;show fluctuationsPrices fluctuated between 40 and 60.
达峰peak at;reach a peak / a high;hit the highest pointIt peaked at 90% in 2020.
触底bottom out;reach a low / a trough;hit the lowest pointIt bottomed out at 5% in 2003.

⚠️ level off ≠ fall:level off 是"由升降转为持平"。

名词形式(There be / see a ___ 句型)
方向名词例句
上升a rise / an increase / a growth / a surge / an upward trendThere was a sharp rise in internet use.
下降a fall / a decrease / a decline / a downward trendThe country saw a steady decline in car use.
波动a fluctuationThere were slight fluctuations throughout.

🔑 动词⇄名词互换:*Internet use rose sharply.* = *There was a sharp rise in internet use.*

程度词(副词配动词 / 形容词配名词,成对记)
幅度副词(rise ___)形容词(a ___ rise)
大/快sharply · dramatically · rapidly · steeply · markedly · substantially · considerably · significantlysharp · dramatic · rapid · steep · marked · substantial · considerable · significant
中/稳steadily · gradually · moderately · consistentlysteady · gradual · moderate · consistent
小/慢slightly · marginally · minimallyslight · marginal · minimal
倍数与量级 + 介词雷区
表达例句
double / triple / quadruple;halve;a X-fold increaseThe figure doubled from 20% to 40%. | There was a threefold increase in users.

🚫 介词:to(终点值)/ by(变化量)/ at(某点值)。rose to 90%(到90)≠ rose by 20%(增加20点)。

线图四大高分句型(一个趋势四种写法)
1 主语+动词+副词:The percentage rose sharply from 25% to 65% between 2000 and 2010. 2 There + be + a + 形容词 + 名词 + in:There was a sharp rise in the percentage… 3 主语 + saw / witnessed + a + 形容词 + 名词(物做主语):The USA saw a sharp rise in internet access. 4 形容词+名词作主语+动词:A sharp rise was recorded in internet access.
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柱状图 Bar Chart —— 比较对比描述

柱图横轴是类别,考"比高低、比多少",没有趋势,别写 increased over the years。

更高 / 更低 / 超出
含义表达例句
比…高be higher than;exceed;surpass;outnumberA's rate was higher than B's. | A exceeded B by 20%.
比…低be lower than;be beneath;fall behindC's figure was lower than the others.
领先by a wide margin;by far;considerablyA was ahead by a wide margin.

📌 exceed / surpass 及物,直接加宾语(A exceeded B),不接 than

最值 / 排名
含义表达例句
最高the highest / largest / greatest;rank first;come top;top the listA had the highest percentage. | A ranked first.
最低the lowest / smallest / least;rank last;at the bottomF was the lowest of all.
次高/居中the second highest;in the middle;middle-rankingB was the second highest, followed by C.

🔑 followed by 是柱图神句:A was the highest, followed by B and C.

相近 / 倍数
表达含义例句
similar to / roughly the same as / nearly identical to相近C and D were roughly the same.
twice as … as;double / triple;half the … of倍数/分数A was twice as high as F. | A doubled B.
差距大小副词 + 数值表达
幅度副词例句
大/明显significantly · considerably · substantially · markedly · far · by farA was significantly higher than B.
中等slightly · somewhat · modestly · a littleC was slightly above D.
几乎roughly · nearly · almost · virtuallyC and D were nearly identical.

数值:A exceeded B by 20% | A was 20% higher than B | A was three times as large as B.

柱状图四大高分句型
1 A + be + 比较级 + than B:Sweden's share was significantly higher than Greece's (85% vs 19%). 2 A + had the + 最高级 +, followed by B and C:Sweden had the highest share…, followed by Spain and Italy. 3 The remaining X + combined:The remaining three countries combined accounted for less than 20%. 4 Whereas A …, B …:Whereas Sweden led, Greece remained the lowest throughout.
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饼图 Pie Chart —— 占比描述

饼图考"同一整体的占比分配",常用一般现在时;多年份饼图则写"占比 + 变化"。

占比动词 + 份额名词
英文中文例句
account for / make up / represent占 / 构成 / 代表Teachers' salaries accounted for 40% of spending.
comprise / constitute构成 / 组成The five categories comprised 100%.
the largest share / the majority / a minority / the remainder / the bulk最大份额 / 多数 / 少数 / 剩余 / 主体Teachers' salaries had the largest share.
排名 / 归并 / 数值表达
功能表达例句
排名rank first / top the list;come second;at the bottom;exceedThe UK ranked first; Sweden at the bottom.
归并the remaining / combined / the restThe remaining three items combined accounted for 60%.
数值(句首/句末)accounting for X% / making up X% / standing at X%Teachers' salaries, accounting for 40%, were the largest.

占比副词:by far / significantly / slightly / marginally。

饼图四大高分句型
1 A + accounted for + 最大占比:Teachers' salaries accounted for the largest proportion, at 40% in 1981. 2 A + made up X%, followed by B:…made up 40%, followed by other workers (28%) and resources (15%). 3 While A …, B …:While teachers' salaries rose, furniture spending fell. 4 归并 others:The remaining four items made up the rest.
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表格 Table —— 多维静态数值对比

表格写法同饼图(排名/最值/归并),更强调跨行跨列找规律、分组描述

核心描述词 + 高分句型
功能表达例句
排第一/垫底rank first / top the list | at the bottomThe UK topped the list; Sweden ranked last.
超过exceedUK sales exceeded the other four combined.
归并the remaining / combined / the restThe remaining three regions combined accounted for <20%.

💡 不要逐格罗列数字——按"最高组/最低组/中间梯队"分组写。

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综合图 Combined —— 两图组合

综合图 = 两张图放一起,把前面写法拼起来,再加一句"两图怎么关联"的连接句。

两图连接句型(三种逻辑)
逻辑连接句型例句
并列While the pie chart shows…, the table reveals…While the pie chart shows the main causes, the table reveals how they affected three regions.
因果The two charts reveal a clear link : …The two charts reveal a clear link: over-grazing, 63% globally, was also dominant in Oceania.
印证Both charts point to the same pattern — …Both charts point to the same pattern — over-grazing led globally (35%) and in Oceania (11.3%).
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流程图 Process —— 被动语态 + 顺序

流程图考"过程怎么发生",命脉是被动语态 + 顺序连接词,全程"物被做",不写人。

被动语态 + 顺序 + 阶段
功能表达例句
被动is / are pumped;is heated;is converted;is used / producedCold water is pumped down an injection well.
顺序First / To begin with;Then / Next / After that;Once…has been…;Finally / In the final stageFirst, cold water is pumped down. Next, it is heated.
阶段the first step / stage;the next stage;the final phase;the production processThe first step involves pumping cold water underground.
流程四大高分句型
1 被动+顺序:Cold water is first pumped down an injection well to a depth of 4.5 km. 2 阶段名词引导:The next stage involves heating the water, which is heated by hot rocks. 3 Once / After 连接:Once the water has been heated, it is pumped up and passes into a condenser. 4 结果/产出:Finally, steam drives the turbine and electricity is generated.
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地图 Map —— 方位 + 变化动词

地图考"现在 vs 规划的变化",魂 = 定位 + 变化动词 + 对比。变化可用被动也可用主动将来时。

方位介词 + 变化动词 + 时段
功能表达例句
方位in the north / south;to the east / west of;along the main road;in the centreA new park is planned in the north of the town.
变化be built / constructed;be demolished / removed;be relocated / moved;be converted into / replaced byA bus station will be built; the shops are replaced by a centre.
时段at present / currently;in the planned development;by 2020 / in the futureAt present, there is a park surrounded by housing.
地图四大高分句型
1 现状定位:At present, a park lies in the north, surrounded by housing. 2 变化(被动):A new dual carriageway is planned to bypass the centre; a bus station will be built. 3 变化(主动):The centre will be pedestrianised; housing expands to the north. 4 对比:Whereas the current layout has no bypass, the plan adds one — the most striking change being the new carriageway.
速查表(背这页就够)
功能句型
总趋势Overall, the figure rose steadily from… to…
比较A is roughly twice as large as B.
描述变化The number surged / plummeted / fluctuated / remained stable.
占比X accounted for the largest share, at 40%.
排名The UK ranked first; Sweden came bottom.
地图The layout was redesigned so that…
流程The process consists of … stages and is completed by

变化动词库:surge(激增)/ soar(飙升)/ decline(下降)/ plummet(骤降)/ fluctuate(波动)/ plateau(持平)。

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大作文总论:题型识别 + 评分
要求
  • 字数 ≥ 250 词,建议 40 分钟;题型=议论文,亮立场并论证。
题型识别(先认出考你什么)
题型信号词写法要点
观点类To what extent do you agree?明确站边,两段论证同一立场
讨论类Discuss both views and give your opinion.一段A一段B,结尾亮观点
优缺点类Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?一段优点一段缺点,判权重
报告类What are the causes / solutions?一段原因一段对策
混合类Why? Is it positive or negative?逐条回应问号,别漏

⚠️ 审题铁律:题目有几个问号就回应几个,混合类漏答 TR 直接掉档。

评分四维度

TR 任务回应 | CC 连贯衔接 | LR 词汇丰富 | GRA 语法多样。四段式:引言→主体1→主体2(让步)→结论,每段固定三步:主题句→论证→例证。

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四段式框架 + 每段固定句型
引言段(改写 + 立场)
功能句型
改写题目It is often argued that… / A common belief is that…
亮明立场From my perspective, I firmly believe that… / I partly agree
路线图This essay will examine both sides before concluding.
主体段(固定三步)
步骤句型
主题句The primary reason is that… / A further point is…
论证This is because… / As a result, … / Consequently, …
举例For instance, … / A case in point is…
对比反证Without this, … / By contrast, …
让步段 + 结论段
功能句型
让步Admittedly, … / It is true that…, however, … / the drawbacks pale in comparison with the benefits.
结论In conclusion, I am convinced that… / it is advisable for governments to… / If this trend continues, …
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万能论点库(往主题句里塞)
方向英文例句
经济增长promote economic growthTourism can promote economic growth in rural areas.
社会进步drive social progressEducation drives social progress.
个人发展foster personal developmentSports foster personal development in teens.
保护环境protect the environmentWe must protect the environment.
生活质量improve quality of lifeSmart homes improve quality of life.
效率enhance efficiencyAutomation enhances efficiency at work.
缩小差距bridge the gapOnline learning helps bridge the gap between rich and poor.
公众意识raise public awarenessCampaigns raise public awareness of health.
责任感cultivate a sense of responsibilitySchools should cultivate a sense of responsibility.
保障就业secure employmentInfrastructure projects secure employment.
传承文化preserve cultural identityMuseums help preserve cultural identity.
缓解压力alleviate stressHobbies alleviate stress after work.
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衔接过渡词库(解决 CC)
功能表达
递进furthermore / moreover / in addition / besides
转折however / nevertheless / whereas / on the other hand
因果therefore / as a result / owing to / consequently
举例for instance / for example / namely / a case in point
总结in conclusion / overall / to sum up / all in all
对比by contrast / unlike / in comparison

示例:Online study is flexible; however, it lacks face-to-face interaction.

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话题高频词汇(配例句)
教育 / 科技
表达中文例句
acquire knowledge获取知识Students acquire knowledge through practice.
cultivate critical thinking培养批判性思维Schools should cultivate critical thinking.
rote learning死记硬背Rote learning kills creativity.
technological advancement科技进步Technological advancement reshapes our life.
digital divide数字鸿沟The digital divide widens inequality.
double-edged sword双刃剑AI is a double-edged sword.
环境 / 社会 / 健康工作
表达中文例句
sustainable development可持续发展Sustainable development is the goal.
carbon emission碳排放We must cut carbon emissions.
income inequality收入不平等Income inequality fuels unrest.
impose regulations实施监管They impose regulations on pollution.
misinformation虚假信息Social media spreads misinformation.
work-life balance工作生活平衡Work-life balance reduces burnout.
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低级 → 高级 替换表
低级高级例句
goodbeneficial / desirableExercise is beneficial to health.
baddetrimental / harmfulSmoking is detrimental.
importantcrucial / vitalEducation is crucial for growth.
thinkargue / maintainCritics argue that…
more and moreincreasinglyIt is increasingly common.
a lot ofa multitude ofA multitude of factors exist.
richaffluent / wealthyAffluent nations should help.
helpfacilitate / assistTech can facilitate learning.
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范文示例(逐段解析)

题目:Some people think universities should focus on academic subjects, while others believe they should teach practical skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

引言(改写 + 立场)
It is widely debated whether higher education should prioritise academic or practical training. While theoretical knowledge builds a foundation, I believe universities must integrate both, with slightly more weight on applicable skills.
主体1(观点A:学术)
The primary argument for academic subjects is that they cultivate critical thinking and a deep understanding of principles. For instance, a physics student learns not only formulas but also how to reason — a transferable ability crucial for any career.
主体2(观点B + 立场)
Nevertheless, detrimental gaps appear when graduates lack hands-on skills. Admittedly, pure theory has long-term value; however, job satisfaction and employability rise when courses include internships. Therefore, I partly agree that practical training deserves more room.
结论(重述 + 升华)
In conclusion, universities should strike a balance between the two, facilitating both intellectual and professional growth.

亮点词:integrate / cultivate critical thinking / crucial / detrimental / facilitate;衔接词 While / For instance / Nevertheless / Admittedly / however / Therefore 串起逻辑。