廖奕然 · 0722 人物描述练习

教师:赵日 | 基于 0722 素材 + 人物类课件四模块框架 | 两份完整人物描述(篮球朋友 + 高中教练)· 三档难度点击填空

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弹药库 · 今日素材整理(你写的 0722,干净版)
用法:下面是你 0722 里给的弹药,先读熟,再做下面两份完整人物描述——点空白处看关键表达,练到脱口而出。两份都按课件「描述 → 理由 → 强调 → 展望」四步走。

① 语篇标记词(开口第一句就用)

功能表达
寒暄 / 起头Well / Actually / Y'know / In my opinion / From my perspective
诚实说To be honest / Honestly speaking / Frankly speaking / Generally speaking(总的来说)

② 「喜欢」同义替换(别反复用 like)

替换例句骨架
be into / be fond of / be keen onI'm (really) into basketball. / He's fond of ...
be crazy about / be keen to doHe's crazy about basketball. / I'm keen to improve.
be fascinated by / be a fan ofShe's fascinated by ... / I'm a fan of ...
get a kick out of / derive pleasure fromI get a kick out of it. / He derives pleasure from ...

③ 虚拟对比句型 · would have done(你原话)

It may cost only 50 yuan on a T-shirt, while it would have taken at least 200 in a shopping mall.
=「实际花得少」vs「换种情况本可能花得多」。下面描述里会用到。

④ 你这篇的核心人物词库(篮球朋友)

维度表达(填空练习里会反复出现)
外貌lean and athletic | a sharp jawline | warm crinkly eyes | carries himself with quiet confidence | a clean-cut look
性格incredibly resilient | never throws in the towel | strongly encouraged us | came from behind / a big turnover | a strong chemical reaction between us
💡 下面两份描述就是把这些词「长」进完整 2 分钟回答里,三档难度挖空密度递进。
初级=挖核心实词·带中文提示;进阶=挖功能表达与句型;终极=整段拆意群·只留骨架逼复述
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人物描述一 · 篮球朋友(初级)
模块1 人物描述 · 身份 + 外貌 + 性格

身份 & 关系:Well, the person I want to talk about is my teammate Leo. He's my _____前队友, who I've known since we played on the same _____篮球队. I first met him when I joined the school team, back in 2021.

外貌(三段式):At first glance, he comes across as lean and _____健壮的. What strikes me most is his _____棱角分明的下颌, and his warm crinkly eyes carry himself with _____沉静的自信. You can always spot him by his _____干净利落的外表.

性格(标签→解释→例子):He is incredibly _____坚韧的. By that I mean, no matter how hard things get, he never _____认输/放弃. I remember one time in a basketball match, we were behind by 20 points, and most of our teammates already decided to give up. But he didn't — instead, he strongly encouraged us and fought for every opportunity, even though he was exhausted and injured. At least we _____逆转 and accomplished a big _____大逆转, all thanks to him.

模块2 万能理由 · explain why

Actually, there are a couple of reasons why I wanted to talk about him. The main reason is that being around him pushes me to become a better version of myself. For instance, his attitude inspires me to never give up when things get tough. On top of that, he is the person I can always _____依靠, no questions asked. I mean, a decent pair of sneakers costs me 300 yuan online, while it would have taken at least 600 in a mall — and he's the one who taught me to find smart, _____省钱的 ways like that.

模块3 Compare 强调 · 钉记忆点

The thing that _____让他出众 is his resilience. Unlike most people who complain about setbacks, he treats every failure as a stepping stone. I'll never forget the time when his shot decided the final. What struck me was that, even after missing three in a row, he _____没慌/保持冷静 and nailed the winning one. Looking back, I realise that's what true toughness looks like.

模块4 Future · 将来时态收束

Looking ahead, I have no doubt that he _____大有作为 in life. Given how resilient he is, I wouldn't be surprised if he ends up playing professionally. As for me, I'm hoping to _____保持联系再一起打球 someday.

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人物描述二 · 高中教练 / 导师(初级)
模块1 人物描述 · 身份 + 外貌 + 性格

身份 & 关系:The person I'd like to describe is my former _____篮球教练, Mr. Lin, who I've known for over _____三年. I first met him when I joined the school team, back in my senior year.

外貌(三段式):At first glance, he comes across as broad-shouldered and composed. What strikes me most is his _____温暖的笑眼, and he carries himself with _____沉静的自信. You can always spot him by his _____一丝不苟的外表.

性格(标签→解释→例子):He is incredibly _____坚毅的 — by that I mean, he never _____轻易放弃. I remember the time around my high school graduation exam — it _____象征从少年到成人的过渡, and he was the one who kept me grounded when I felt overwhelmed.

模块2 万能理由 · explain why

The main reason is that Mr. Lin has had a _____深远影响 on the way I approach challenges. For instance, he taught me that setbacks are just setups for comebacks — I honestly don't think I'd be where I am today _____没有他的指导. On top of that, whenever I _____遇到瓶颈, he is the first person who comes to mind.

模块3 Compare 强调 · 钉记忆点

What I find most remarkable about him is his ability to _____压力下保持冷静. Unlike most coaches who only care about winning, he genuinely _____投入于 his players' growth. I'll never forget the time when our team was knocked out of the tournament. What struck me was that instead of blaming us, he sat us down and mapped out exactly how to improve. Looking back, I realise that's what a real mentor does.

模块4 Future · 将来时态收束

Looking ahead, I have no doubt that he _____会继续激励年轻球员. Given how passionate he is about teaching, I wouldn't be surprised if he _____开办自己的学院. As for me, I'm hoping to _____保持联系或与他一起执教 someday.

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人物描述一 · 篮球朋友(进阶)
模块1 人物描述 · 身份 + 外貌 + 性格

身份 & 关系:_____, the person I want to talk about is my teammate Leo. He's my _____, who I've known since we played on the same _____. I first met him when I joined the school team, back in _____.

外貌(三段式):At first glance, he _____. What strikes me most is his _____, and his _____ carries himself with _____. You can always spot him by his _____.

性格(标签→解释→例子):He is incredibly _____. By that I mean, no matter how hard things get, he never _____. I remember one time in a basketball match, we were _____, and most of our teammates already decided to _____. But he didn't — instead, he _____ and fought for every opportunity, even though he was _____. At least we _____ and accomplished a big _____, all thanks to him.

模块2 万能理由 · explain why

Actually, there are a couple of reasons why I wanted to talk about him. The main reason is that being around him _____. For instance, his attitude inspires me to never give up when things get tough. On top of that, he is the person I can always _____, no questions asked. I mean, a decent pair of sneakers costs me 300 yuan online, _____ — and he's the one who taught me to find smart, _____ ways like that.

模块3 Compare 强调 · 钉记忆点

The thing that _____ is his resilience. _____, he treats every failure as a stepping stone. I'll never forget the time when his shot decided the final. What struck me was that, even after missing three in a row, he _____ and nailed the winning one. Looking back, I _____ that's what true toughness looks like.

模块4 Future · 将来时态收束

Looking ahead, I have no doubt that he _____ in life. Given how resilient he is, I wouldn't be surprised if he _____. As for me, I'm hoping to _____ someday.

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人物描述二 · 高中教练 / 导师(进阶)
模块1 人物描述 · 身份 + 外貌 + 性格

身份 & 关系:The person I'd like to describe is my former _____, Mr. Lin, who I've known for _____. I first met him when I joined the school team, back in my _____.

外貌(三段式):At first glance, he _____. What strikes me most is his _____, and he _____. You can always spot him by his _____.

性格(标签→解释→例子):He is incredibly _____ — by that I mean, he never _____. I remember the time around my high school graduation exam — it _____, and he was the one who kept me grounded when I felt overwhelmed.

模块2 万能理由 · explain why

The main reason is that Mr. Lin has had a _____ on the way I approach challenges. For instance, he taught me that setbacks are just setups for comebacks — I honestly don't think I'd be where I am today _____. On top of that, whenever I _____, he is the first person who comes to mind.

模块3 Compare 强调 · 钉记忆点

What I find most remarkable about him is his ability to _____. _____, he genuinely invests in his players' growth. I'll never forget the time when our team was knocked out of the tournament. What struck me was that instead of blaming us, he sat us down and mapped out exactly how to improve. Looking back, I realise that's what a real mentor does.

模块4 Future · 将来时态收束

Looking ahead, I have no doubt that he _____. Given how passionate he is about teaching, I wouldn't be surprised if he _____. As for me, I'm hoping to _____ someday.

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人物描述一 · 篮球朋友(终极)
模块1 人物描述 · 身份 + 外貌 + 性格

身份 & 关系:_____, the person I want to talk about is my teammate _____. He's my _____, who I've known since we played on the same _____. I first _____ him when I _____ the school team, back in _____.

外貌(三段式):_____, he _____. What _____ me most is his _____, and his _____ _____ himself with _____. You can always _____ him by his _____.

性格(标签→解释→例子):He is _____. By that I _____, no matter how hard things _____, he never _____. I _____ one time in a basketball match, we were _____, and most of our _____ already decided to _____. But he _____ — instead, he _____ and _____ for every _____, even though he was _____. At least we _____ and _____ a big _____, all _____ him.

模块2 万能理由 · explain why

_____, there are a _____ of reasons why I wanted to talk about him. The _____ reason is that being _____ him _____. For _____, his attitude _____ me to never give up when things get _____. On top of _____, he is the person I can always _____, no questions _____. I mean, a decent pair of _____ costs me 300 yuan _____, _____ — and he's the one who _____ me to find smart, _____ ways like that.

模块3 Compare 强调 · 钉记忆点

The thing that _____ is his _____. _____, he _____ every failure as a _____. I'll never _____ the time when his _____ decided the _____. What struck me was that, even after _____ three in a row, he _____ and _____ the winning one. Looking _____, I _____ that's what true _____ looks like.

模块4 Future · 将来时态收束

_____, I have no _____ that he _____ in life. _____ how resilient he is, I wouldn't be _____ if he _____. As for me, I'm _____ to _____ someday.

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人物描述二 · 高中教练 / 导师(终极)
模块1 人物描述 · 身份 + 外貌 + 性格

身份 & 关系:The person I'd like to _____ is my former _____, Mr. Lin, who I've _____ for _____. I first _____ him when I _____ the school team, back in my _____.

外貌(三段式):_____, he _____. What _____ me most is his _____, and he _____. You can always _____ him by his _____.

性格(标签→解释→例子):He is _____ — by that I _____, he never _____. I _____ the time around my high school _____ — it _____, and he was the one who _____ when I _____.

模块2 万能理由 · explain why

The _____ reason is that Mr. Lin has had a _____ on the way I _____ challenges. For _____, he taught me that _____ — I honestly don't think I'd be where I am today _____. On top of _____, whenever I _____, he is the first person who _____.

模块3 Compare 强调 · 钉记忆点

What I _____ is his ability to _____. _____, he genuinely _____ his players' growth. I'll never _____ the time when our team was _____. What struck me was that instead of _____, he _____ and _____. Looking back, I realise that's what a real _____ does.

模块4 Future · 将来时态收束

_____, I have no _____ that he _____. _____ how passionate he is about teaching, I wouldn't be _____ if he _____. As for me, I'm _____ to _____ someday.

🔁 复习节奏:建议从初级做起,把带中文提示的空填顺;再切进阶练功能表达与句型;最后用终极逼自己整段复述。每天挑一篇朗读 30 分钟,两份都顺了人物类话题基本就通了。