一、中译英
参考译文
二、英译中
参考译文
三、重点词汇讲解
▎中译英重点词汇
| 中文 | 英文 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| 人口老龄化 | population ageing | China is undergoing the fastest population ageing in the world. (中国正在经历世界上速度最快的人口老龄化进程。) |
| 养老服务体系 | elderly care service system | A multi-tiered elderly care service system is taking shape. (多层次的养老服务体系正在形成。) |
| 银发经济 | the silver economy | The silver economy has become a new growth engine. (银发经济已成为新的增长引擎。) |
| 医养结合 | integration of medical care and elderly care | The integration of medical care and elderly care eases the burden on families. (医养结合减轻了家庭负担。) |
| 社会保障体系 | social security system | The social security system covers over one billion people. (社会保障体系覆盖十亿多人。) |
| 人口红利 | demographic dividend | We should turn the demographic dividend into a talent dividend. (我们应把人口红利转化为人才红利。) |
| 安享晚年 | enjoy a happy life in one’s later years | Every senior citizen deserves to enjoy a happy life in his or her later years. (每位老年人都应当安享幸福晚年。) |
| 适老化改造 | age-friendly renovation | Over 10 million homes have undergone age-friendly renovation. (一千多万户住宅完成了适老化改造。) |
▎英译中重点词汇
| 英文 | 中文 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| demographic shift | 人口结构变化 | This profound demographic shift reshapes public budgets. (这一深刻的人口结构变化重塑着公共财政。) |
| working-age population | 劳动年龄人口 | The working-age population continues to shrink. (劳动年龄人口持续萎缩。) |
| long-term care | 长期照护 | Governments are investing in long-term care infrastructure. (各国政府正加大对长期照护基础设施的投入。) |
| later-life employment | 老年就业;退休后再就业 | Policies now encourage later-life employment. (相关政策正在鼓励老年就业。) |
| fiscal arithmetic | 财政测算;财政上的精打细算 | The best approaches go beyond fiscal arithmetic. (最好的思路并不止于财政上的精打细算。) |
| a burden to be financed | 需要供养的负担 | Older adults are not simply a burden to be financed. (老年人并非只是需要供养的负担。) |
| with ageing in mind | 充分考虑老龄化因素 | Cities redesign transport with ageing in mind. (城市在改造交通时充分考虑老龄化因素。) |
| liveable | 宜居的 | Such cities become more liveable for everyone. (这样的城市对所有人都更加宜居。) |
四、翻译技巧:重复法 Repetition
📖 定义
重复法是指在译文中有意重复原文出现过的词语、结构或意义,以求达意清晰、语气强调或行文通顺的翻译方法。它与“啰嗦”有本质区别:英语讲究避复,多用代词、替代词和省略;汉语则常借重复实现衔接与强调。因此英译汉时往往要“化隐为显”,把英语省略或用代词替代的成分重复出来;汉译英时则要“化显为隐”,用代词、替代词或省略来避免刺耳的重复。
🎯 适用场景
还原英语代词:it / they / this / those 等代词在汉语中常需重复其所指名词,否则指代模糊。
共用成分的展开:英语一个动词或介词后并列多个宾语时,汉语常重复该动词或介词,读来更顺。
表示强调与情感:汉语靠重复增强语势,如“重塑着……重塑着……也重塑着……”。
构成排比与四字格:为使译文节奏匀称,可重复某一成分形成排比句式。
汉译英的反向操作:原文重复过多时,英译须用 代词、替代词(one, do so, that of)或省略 加以精简。
原文:Ageing reshapes labour markets, public budgets and family life alike.
译文:老龄化重塑着劳动力市场,重塑着公共财政,也重塑着家庭生活。
说明:英语一个动词带三个并列宾语,汉语重复“重塑着”,节奏匀称,语义层层递进。
原文:Yet the most promising approaches go beyond fiscal arithmetic. They recognise that older adults are a resource to be mobilised.
译文:然而,最有前景的思路并不止于财政上的精打细算。这些思路认识到,老年人是可以调动的资源。
说明:They 指前文的 approaches,若直译为“它们”则指代不清,重复“这些思路”一目了然。
原文:...a resource to be mobilised — as mentors, caregivers, consumers and volunteers.
译文:他们可以是导师,可以是照护者,可以是消费者,也可以是志愿者。
说明:英语用一个 as 统领四个名词;汉语重复“可以是”,避免四个名词干巴巴地堆叠。
原文:我们要保障老年人的合法权益,保障老年人的医疗需求,保障老年人的精神生活。
译文:We must safeguard the lawful rights and interests of older people, as well as their medical needs and their spiritual well-being.
说明:汉语三个“保障老年人的”是排比;英语只保留一个 safeguard,用 as well as 与物主代词 their 串联,避免生硬重复。
重复不等于啰嗦:只有在有助于达意、强调或衔接时才重复,可有可无时一律删去。
方向意识要清晰:英语避复、汉语好复,切忌把汉语的排比原样搬进英语,也别把英语的省略照搬进汉语。
代词还原须准确:还原前务必核对代词所指,指错比不还原更糟糕。
重复要讲节奏:汉语的重复常与四字格、排比配合,注意音节匀称,避免拖泥带水。
考场提示:英译汉遇到 do so / one / that of / the former…the latter 等替代结构,多半就是需要重复还原的信号。