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雅思写作强化课第8课 · 大作文 Task 2 课后练习（冲刺模考）

配套课后作业 · 建议用时 30–40 分钟 · 判题型 / 找茬改错 / 中译英 / 完整模考
做完后点底部「📥 导出我的答案」保存为 txt，发给我批改。 Part 1–3 练题型辨识 / 改错 / 考前核心句，Part 4 写一篇完整模考大作文（40 分钟节奏，开头+2主体+结尾）。

Part 1 · 综合判题型 + 立立场（选择 ×6）

读题面，选出它的题型（Opinion 同意与否 / Discussion 双方讨论 / AD 利弊 / Problem-Solution 原因对策 / Two-part 两问）。
1
"It is important for children to learn right from wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" 是？
2
"Some people think students should study freely; others say only useful subjects. Discuss both views." 是？
3
"Many museums charge for admission. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" 是？
4
"The amount of crime is increasing. What are the causes and how can we deal with them?" 是？
5
"Countries are becoming similar because people buy the same products. Is this positive or negative?" 是？
6
"Some parents buy children many toys. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child?" 是？

Part 2 · 找茬改错（×4，改跑题 / 病句 / 衔接 / 语法重复）

下面 4 句都有问题，先自己改，再点"看参考"对照。
1
病句："Because many people are poor, so crime increase." → 你的修改：
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Because many people are poor, crime increases. （去掉 so 避免双连词；crime 单数配 increases）
2
跑题/空："I think crime is a big problem and we should stop it because it is bad." → 你的修改：
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Poverty drives crime, so job training and fair policing are needed. （补具体因果，不空喊）
3
衔接硬："Crime rises. Crime is bad. Government makes laws. Crime falls." → 你的修改：
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As crime rises, it harms society; therefore, laws curbing it can reduce the problem. （用 therefore + 指代 it/the problem 串联）
4
语法重复："I think the government should help. I think education is good. I think crime will drop." → 你的修改：
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I believe the government should fund education, which would lower crime. （合并为从句，消除重复）

Part 3 · 中译英（×6，考前核心句，必须用到指定表达）

根据中文翻译，必须用到指定表达；写完检查题型立场句。
1
中文：在我看来，政府投资公共服务比投资艺术更重要。
⚡ 必须用到：In my view / deserve more ... than
2
中文：双方观点都有道理，但我倾向于后者。
⚡ 必须用到：Both arguments have merit, yet I lean towards
3
中文：这一现象的负面影响不容忽视。
⚡ 必须用到：The negative implications ... cannot be overlooked
4
中文：造成这一问题的主要原因之一是贫困。
⚡ 必须用到：One leading cause of ... is
5
中文：可采取的措施包括加强教育与就业支持。
⚡ 必须用到：Feasible measures include ... and
6
中文：综上所述，个人责任与政策支持缺一不可。
⚡ 必须用到：In conclusion / are both indispensable

Part 4 · 完整模考大作文（一篇 Task 2 · 40 分钟节奏）

用下面这篇真题（Task 2 · 同意与否类），按 40 分钟节奏写一篇大作文：开头段（paraphrase + 立场） + 两个主体段（严格按 点→析→例→扣） + 结尾段（重申立场 + 总结理由）。
🧱 四段骨架（照这个写）
· Para 1 开头：paraphrase 题目 + thesis 亮立场
· Para 2 主体1（支持惩罚必要）：【点】中心句 →【析】解释 →【例】具体例子 →【扣】回题目
· Para 3 主体2（惩罚方式要适度）：同样四步
· Para 4 结尾：【重申】立场 +【总结】理由一句
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题目：It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
你的大作文（开头段完整 + 2 主体段各四步 + 结尾两件事，约 250 词目标）：
🙈 写完再点：参考范文骨架（先自己写，别偷看！）
Para 1（开头）：It is widely held that children must learn right from wrong early, and that discipline helps. From my perspective, punishment is necessary but must stay mild and fair.

Para 2（主体1 · 惩罚必要）：【点】Discipline teaches the cost of wrongdoing. 【析】This is because clear consequences shape moral habits. 【例】A case in point is classroom rules that cut bullying. 【扣】Therefore, measured punishment builds character.

Para 3（主体2 · 方式适度）：【点】Yet punishment should be non-violent. 【析】This is largely because harshness breeds fear, not understanding. 【例】Reasoning and timeout work better than physical scolding. 【扣】Thus, gentle methods suit teaching.

Para 4（结尾）：In conclusion, I remain convinced punishment is needed, yet only mild, fair forms truly teach good behaviour.

👆 两个问题都要回应：是否同意惩罚必要（同意，适度）+ 该用什么惩罚（非暴力）。结尾重申+总结，不写新观点。

点击上方按钮，将答案保存为文件，然后发给老师～

💡 练习小贴士：
1. Part 1 把五大题型各自"立场句"抄进笔记，见题 5 秒判型。
2. Part 2 重点练"改错"：双连词、单复数、衔接、重复 I think 是高频坑。
3. Part 3 翻译完对照中文，确认用到了指定表达。
4. Part 4 写完后，对照考前 6 条：题型判对？四段齐？主体四步？结尾重申+总结？字数≥250？