🧱 四段骨架(两篇都照这个写)
· Para 1 引言:用同义替换把题目改写一句(The diagram shows how / The diagrams below show the life cycle of ... | The two maps show an island, before and after ...)
· Para 2 Overview:不写细节 / 不写个人观点——流程说"几个阶段 + 起止";地图说"最显著的变化是什么"
· Para 3 主体1:流程按 First → Next 串前几个阶段(全被动);地图写"现状布局"
· Para 4 主体2:流程写后几个阶段到终点;地图写"规划中的变化"(变化动词 + 对比)
▸ Part 4A · 流程图(剑桥 10 T4 · 鲑鱼生命周期)
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题目:The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 你的流程图小作文(4 段,约 150 词):
🙈 写完再点:鲑鱼流程图参考范文(先自己写,别偷看!)
The diagrams show the life cycle of a large fish called the salmon.
Overall, the process takes about nine years in total and involves three main stages, beginning with eggs being laid in an upper river and ending with adult salmon returning to spawn.
First, salmon eggs are laid in the upper river, which is slow moving, among reeds and small stones, and they are incubated for approximately 3 to 6 months. The eggs then hatch into fry, which are carried downstream to the lower river, a fast-flowing environment, where they spend around 4 years growing into smolt. Once they have developed, the smolt are transported further downstream to the open sea, where they live for about 5 years before becoming adult salmon of 70 to 76 cm in length. Finally, the adult salmon return upstream to the place where they were born to lay new eggs and start the cycle again.
👆 全篇被动(are laid / are incubated / are carried / are transported)+ 顺序连接(First / Once / Finally)+ 带关键数据(3-6 months / 4 years / 5 years / 70-76 cm)。
▸ Part 4B · 地图(剑桥 9 T1 · 岛屿旅游开发)
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题目:The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 你的地图小作文(4 段,约 150 词):
🙈 写完再点:岛屿地图参考范文(先自己写,别偷看!)
The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Overall, the previously undeveloped island has been transformed into a tourist destination, with accommodation, a restaurant and a reception being added in the central area, while the natural coastline and palm trees are largely preserved.
Before the development, the island was largely natural, with a beach on the western side, palm trees scattered across the land, and the sea surrounding it. No buildings, roads or facilities were present on the island at that time.
After the construction, a number of small buildings have been built in the centre to serve as accommodation for visitors. A reception and a restaurant are also located in the same area, and a pier extends from the south coast into the sea. A footpath network connects the various facilities, and a vehicle track runs across the island from west to east. In addition, the western beach has been designated as a swimming area. Whereas the natural scenery remains unchanged, the central area of the island has changed dramatically.
👆 变化动词(has been transformed / have been built / are also located / has been designated)+ 时段词(Before / After)+ 对比(Whereas)。注意 before 部分也用被动(were present)以保持风格统一。
点击上方按钮,将答案保存为文件,然后发给老师~
💡 练习小贴士:
1. Part 1 选完把正确选项抄进自己的「特殊图形词本」,按 被动动词 / 顺序连接 / 方位介词 / 变化动词 四类归档。
2. Part 2 重点盯 is pumped / is heated / are built / are replaced:流程=被动,地图=变化动词,别混。
3. Part 3 翻译完对照中文,确认意思准确且用到了指定表达。
4. Part 4A 鲑鱼 + 4B 岛屿都写完后,对照四段骨架检查:流程有没有「全被动 + 顺序连接 + 关键数据」?地图有没有「方位定位 + 变化动词 + 对比(Whereas / Before vs After)」?