雅思写作强化课第2课 · 柱状图课后练习

配套课后作业 · 建议用时 25–30 分钟 · 柱状图与比较描述
做完后点底部「📥 导出我的答案」保存为 txt,发给我批改。 Part 1–3 先练对,Part 4 用今天学的比较词写一篇完整柱图小作文。

Part 1 · 比较词辨识(选择 ×8)

选出与英文比较表达最匹配的中文意思(或最合情境的词)。
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exceeded 最恰当的中文意思是?
2
ranked first 的意思是?
3
comparable to 最恰当的中文意思是?
4
twice as high as 的意思是?
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the lowest 在柱图里表示?
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followed by 在描述梯队时通常表示?
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lagged far behind 描述的是?
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描述「A 比 B 高很多」,最贴切的表达是?

Part 2 · 倍数与幅度(填空 ×6)

比较级 / 最高级 / exceed / twice as...as / roughly the same / While·Whereas 填空,注意中文提示。
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A's figure was B's.(提示:比较级 higher,用 higher than)
2
A had percentage of all.(提示:最高级,用 the highest)
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A B by 20%.(提示:及物动词"超出",用 exceeded / surpassed,不加 than)
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A was as large as B.(提示:两倍,用 twice)
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The two figures were .(提示:相近,用 roughly the same / nearly identical)
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A reached 80%, B stood at only 12%.(提示:对比连词放句首,用 While / Whereas)

Part 3 · 中译英(×6,必须用到指定词)

根据中文翻译,必须用到指定表达;写完大声朗读检查比较级与介词。
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中文:该城市的人均收入是周边农村地区的三倍。
⚡ 必须用到:three times as ... as / triple(d)
2
中文:在参与调查的三个群体中,青少年组的满意度最低。
⚡ 必须用到:the lowest
3
中文:两种手机的电池续航时间相近,相差不到一小时。
⚡ 必须用到:roughly the same as / comparable to
4
中文:女性读者的比例显著高于男性。
⚡ 必须用到:significantly higher than
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中文:公司的利润在 2020 年达到顶峰,远超其他年份。
⚡ 必须用到:the highest / far above
6
中文:总体而言,东部地区的绿化覆盖率最高,西部地区最低。
⚡ 必须用到:Overall + the highest / the lowest

Part 4 · 完整柱状图小作文(一篇 Task 1)

观察下图(剑桥雅思 18 Test 2 · 出口收入柱状图),写一篇完整的柱图小作文——包含 引言段 + Overview 段 + 两个主体段,字数 150 词左右。把前面 Part 1–3 练的比较词、倍数、对比句型都用上。
剑桥雅思 18 Test 2 出口收入柱状图
🧱 四段骨架(照这个写)
· Para 1 引言:用同义替换把题目改写一句(The chart compares the export earnings of five product categories in 2015 and 2016.)
· Para 2 Overview不写数字,只说大势——哪两类最高、哪两类最低;哪一类增长最快 / 哪一类唯一下降
· Para 3 主体1:写最高组(Petroleum products + Engineered goods),用 the highest / followed by + 具体数据
· Para 4 主体2:写中低组(Gems and jewellery 下降 + Agricultural / Textiles 低位高增长),至少用一次 while / whereas / twice as...as
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你的完整柱状图小作文(四段,约 150 词):
🙈 写完再点:完整参考范文(以 C18T2 出口收入图为例,先自己写,别偷看!)
The bar chart compares the export earnings of five product categories in 2015 and 2016.

Overall, petroleum products and engineered goods were the two highest earners in both years, whereas agricultural products and textiles were considerably lower. It is also notable that textiles saw the fastest growth rate, despite being among the lowest in 2015.

In detail, petroleum products had the highest export earnings in 2016, at around $63 billion, followed by engineered goods at approximately $62 billion. Both categories saw an increase, with engineered goods rising by 8.5% and petroleum products by 3%.

By contrast, gems and jewellery was the only category to decline, falling from about $43 billion to $41 billion. Meanwhile, agricultural products and textiles had the lowest figures, at roughly $32 billion and $31 billion respectively in 2016, although textiles' earnings grew by 15.24%, the fastest rate among the five groups.

👆 引言改写 + Overview 写大势不写数字 + 主体1(最高组 petroleum / engineered)+ 主体2(中低组对比:gems 下降 vs textiles 高增长),正好串起今天全部比较词与句型。真实题以此类写法套用即可。

点击上方按钮,将答案保存为文件,然后发给老师~

💡 练习小贴士:
1. Part 1 选完把正确选项抄进自己的「比较词本」,按 高/低 · 最值 · 相近 · 倍数 四类归档。
2. Part 2 重点盯 than / by / as...as:higher than(比较级)、exceeded by(超出量)、twice as...as(倍数).
3. Part 3 翻译完对照中文,确认意思准确且用到了指定表达。
4. Part 4 完整作文写完后,对照四段骨架检查:有没有「引言改写 + Overview 分梯队不写数字 + 至少两个具体数据对比 + 一次对比(while / whereas / twice as...as)」?